Video is excellent quality. My 2-cents, for what it's worth: I would suggest adding more of a human aspect into the videos, such as you and the people you were on vacation with. Mix the "people" aspect into the location footage, otherwise it's simply a nice collage of video clips of Los Angeles, Universal Studios and Magic Mountain. If you add a "people" aspect into a video, it allows you to create a beginning, middle and end to your story. For example: Besides just showing footage of LAX, involve yourself and the people you are with into the arrival and the surrounding environment. The same goes with your visit to the the theme parks...by adding people into the footage you could show their excitment upon their arrival, their anticipation/anxiety before boarding onto one of the amusement rides, etc. Add some reaction after the ride. Videotape someone in front of King Kong making a funny gesture rather than just having footage of Kong by himself. Other than that, good footage. Oh, keep zooms to a minimum. One of the most overused features of camcorders is the zoom. Think how often you see zooms in movies, TV shows or commercials. It's rare.

Anyways, this is just my 2-cents. Don't hit.